Chapter Two
Excellent writing. Such a vivid portrait of a tortured soul. I'm eager to find out if he's simply mentally ill or is in fact being hounded by someone or something. The second phone call was chilling.
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
I loved these lines:
"Just ‘cause you’re paranoid, doesn’t mean something’s not after you "
and:
"He shot awake. The blanket wrapped him like a giant snake and the television playing an infomercial for a 1-900 psychic helpline."
I was moved by this section:
"Back into the living to a built-in bookshelf to pluck a book and tear it to pieces. You are what you read – tearing up himself."
It made me feel great compassion for Eric. I am hoping (as a reader) Walt will be a person who can help him.
Excellent writing. Such a vivid portrait of a tortured soul. I'm eager to find out if he's simply mentally ill or is in fact being hounded by someone or something. The second phone call was chilling.
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
I loved these lines:
"Just ‘cause you’re paranoid, doesn’t mean something’s not after you "
and:
"He shot awake. The blanket wrapped him like a giant snake and the television playing an infomercial for a 1-900 psychic helpline."
I was moved by this section:
"Back into the living to a built-in bookshelf to pluck a book and tear it to pieces. You are what you read – tearing up himself."
It made me feel great compassion for Eric. I am hoping (as a reader) Walt will be a person who can help him.